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picaso
active member
Number of posts : 58
Age : 35
Location : zagazig
Registration date : 2008-03-19
| | Subject: My Love !! Wed 19 Mar 2008, 18:36 | |
| For God's sake hold your tongue,and let me love;
Alas!Als!who's injured with my love?
Who says my tears have over flowed his ground?
no one can say that, Ifeel my self!!
my love how can I imagine life without u,I can't believe that,coz u r all my life,I remember u every time,every day, every hour,every second,in my room, my home every where. when I breath I feel your love, when I think about any thing,I find you comming to my thoughts. when i go to sleep, I find you in my dreams. I can't forget you for a second, I remember you every time.
Tell me when will you come to my life and leave my dreams. I want you yourself in front of me every time,all the day,all my comming life. Come to me and say (I LOVE U) to make me feel safe. Every time I see you I feel my heart leave my body and go to yours and stay at you and says to me it's my normal place beside him.I want to be with you all my remained days of my life till the last moment.
My Love come soon and say these marvellous words(I LOVE U).
these are some words from my mind, i wish to be good,
i waiting for ur coments,
with all my best wishes
Last edited by picaso on Sun 30 Mar 2008, 20:40; edited 1 time in total | |
| | | | Mohamed Negm
Gold Member
Number of posts : 234
Age : 35
Location : Hehia\ Egypt
Registration date : 2008-03-10
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Thu 20 Mar 2008, 01:15 | |
| very very nice , I enjoyed reading it | |
| | | | jolite
Silver member
Number of posts : 113
Age : 35
Location : diarb negm(i hope to be paradise)
Registration date : 2008-03-21
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Fri 21 Mar 2008, 14:49 | |
| hiiiiiiiiiiiii samora of course very romance as u who wrote
go on sweety | |
| | | | picaso
active member
Number of posts : 58
Age : 35
Location : zagazig
Registration date : 2008-03-19
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Wed 26 Mar 2008, 19:04 | |
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| | | | Admin
Admin
Number of posts : 200
Age : 35
Location : zagazig,egypt
Registration date : 2008-03-09
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Thu 27 Mar 2008, 01:56 | |
| very good ya picaso realy we studied this poem in poetry for the first term but i didn`t enjoy or taste it till i heard it from you you`ve good talent in appriciating poems !!!   thxxxxx very much | |
| | | | picaso
active member
Number of posts : 58
Age : 35
Location : zagazig
Registration date : 2008-03-19
| | | | | Admin
Admin
Number of posts : 200
Age : 35
Location : zagazig,egypt
Registration date : 2008-03-09
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Thu 27 Mar 2008, 18:18 | |
| Realy ?? those are your own words ......!!!! how nice very good ya picso , you seem then very romantic ..... i guess  keep up and don`t forbid us from your cute words we need another poem good luck  | |
| | | | Sweet Emy
Silver member
Number of posts : 151
Age : 36
Location : Zagazig
Registration date : 2008-03-14
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Thu 27 Mar 2008, 21:51 | |
| - picaso wrote:
- For God's sake hold your tongue,and let me love;
Alas!Als!who's injured with my love?
Who says my tears have over flowed his ground?
no one can say that, Ifeel my self!!
my love how can I imagine life without u,I can't believe that,cause u r all my life,I remember u every time,every day, every hour,every second,in my room, my homeevery where. when I breath I feel your love, when I think about any thing,I find you comming to my thoughts. when i go to sleep, I find you in my dreams. I can't forget you for a second, I remember you every time.
Tell me when will you come to my life and leave my dreams. I want you yourself in front of me every time,all the day,all my comming life. Come to me and say (I LOVE U) to make me feel save. Every time I see you I feel my heart leave my body and go to yours and stay at you and says to me it's my normal place beside him.I want to be with you all my remained days of my life till the last moment.
My Love come soon and say these marvellous words(I LOVE U).
these are some words from my mind, i wish to be good,
i waiting for ur coments,
with all my best wishes Nice poem dear Picaso
A real feelings and very sweet words,
I think u do have a talent,so try to improve your skills,
God bless you,
I hope you accept my comment,
you need to put a space between
Ifeel and homeevery,
Comming,I guess you mean coming,
when i breath,I guess u mean
when i breathe,
Breath is a noun means (نفس)
Breathe is a verb means (يتنفس)
To make me feel save,Its supposed to be
To make me feel safe..
Safe is a noun means (أمن )
Save is a verb means (ينقذ ,يحفظ)
I hope u accept my comments,I am just trying to help you to improve your skills,
My best wishes,
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| | | | picaso
active member
Number of posts : 58
Age : 35
Location : zagazig
Registration date : 2008-03-19
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Sun 30 Mar 2008, 20:36 | |
| - Sweet Emy wrote:
- picaso wrote:
- For God's sake hold your tongue,and let me love;
Alas!Als!who's injured with my love?
Who says my tears have over flowed his ground?
no one can say that, Ifeel my self!!
my love how can I imagine life without u,I can't believe that,cause u r all my life,I remember u every time,every day, every hour,every second,in my room, my homeevery where. when I breath I feel your love, when I think about any thing,I find you comming to my thoughts. when i go to sleep, I find you in my dreams. I can't forget you for a second, I remember you every time.
Tell me when will you come to my life and leave my dreams. I want you yourself in front of me every time,all the day,all my comming life. Come to me and say (I LOVE U) to make me feel save. Every time I see you I feel my heart leave my body and go to yours and stay at you and says to me it's my normal place beside him.I want to be with you all my remained days of my life till the last moment.
My Love come soon and say these marvellous words(I LOVE U).
these are some words from my mind, i wish to be good,
i waiting for ur coments,
with all my best wishes
Nice poem dear Picaso
A real feelings and very sweet words,
I think u do have a talent,so try to improve your skills,
God bless you,
I hope you accept my comment,
you need to put a space between
Ifeel and homeevery,
Comming,I guess you mean coming,
when i breath,I guess u mean
when i breathe,
Breath is a noun means (نفس)
Breathe is a verb means (يتنفس)
To make me feel save,Its supposed to be
To make me feel safe..
Safe is a noun means (أمن )
Save is a verb means (ينقذ ,يحفظ)
I hope u accept my comments,I am just trying to help you to improve your skills,
My best wishes,
thx alot for ur comment & i accepted ur comment with pleasure
thx again alot | |
| | | | Mohamed Negm
Gold Member
Number of posts : 234
Age : 35
Location : Hehia\ Egypt
Registration date : 2008-03-10
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Sun 30 Mar 2008, 20:43 | |
| I'm relly happy to see the co-operation between Sweet Emy and Picaso | |
| | | | LEGEND
Gold Member
Number of posts : 363
Age : 34
Registration date : 2008-03-10
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Sun 30 Mar 2008, 21:50 | |
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| | | | picaso
active member
Number of posts : 58
Age : 35
Location : zagazig
Registration date : 2008-03-19
| | Subject: Re: My Love !! Mon 31 Mar 2008, 02:12 | |
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